Memory by Kate DemereeIn those dark hours When our possessions mean naught All we have to hold to Are the memories we have wrought
Warm, willing captive Will I ever be In the softer shadows Where you still Hold me 02/20/2005 Posted on 02/20/2005 Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/21/05 at 10:15 AM beautiful in sentiment and flow...stunning work Kate :) |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/21/05 at 10:34 PM I know those shadows, Kate..and doubt you will ever go unheld |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/21/05 at 11:25 PM I like this a lot Kate....Charlie |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/22/05 at 05:23 PM Poignant...powerful in its brevity and message. I especially like how each stanza stands on its own as a separate entity, while at the same time playing off of one another. Kudos! |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/24/05 at 05:56 PM so very true, thoughts I've had come home so strongly to me in the last month especially. Excellent, Kate. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/24/05 at 11:03 PM this is beautiful and made me cry... sorry, i'm so weepy lately... perfect little poem... blessings... |
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