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Untitled Unedited Belated Valentine

by Kate Demeree

I want to


Roll you around
In my mouth
Like an unfamiliar word
Until you melt
Sweet confection
That you are

Paint I love you
On your abdomen
And along your spine
With the tip of my tongue
Brushing inner thigh

Unwrap
That which I seek
Simply using my teeth
With feathery touch
Speak
French, Italian,
And universal love


02/18/2005

Posted on 02/18/2005
Copyright © 2025 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/18/05 at 08:44 PM

gods this is gorgeous... painted with a lush love brush... divine... blessings...

Posted by David R Spellman on 02/18/05 at 11:49 PM

YEOWZA! Kate, soooooooo GOOD. I think my eyebrows are singed by this one --- Marvelous!!! [;0)~

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/19/05 at 03:03 AM

Hot stuff Katie...Charlie

Posted by Christina Bruno on 02/19/05 at 07:39 AM

kate your poetry is always so wonderful, artful, with excellent images

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 02/21/05 at 10:16 AM

stunning imagery...is it just me or is it hot in here? hehe...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/21/05 at 05:25 PM

Good buildup to those killer last few lines Kate. As my grandfather used to say...delicioso!

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/21/05 at 10:35 PM

hmmm...Valentine's Day around you is quite...unique!

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