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by Indigo Tempestathere's an up and a down reason for what's
done these get turned inside out into
is and to murky remarks on the nature of
man and his woman so not to forget
her as well
let us stand
for the certain unsaids such as
'just that i want'
or 'because it was there'
which allow us to done
without trying to is 02/09/2005 Author's Note: try saying it. it's not my style at all but i don't quite mind this one...yet.
Posted on 02/09/2005
Copyright © 2025 Indigo Tempesta
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/10/05 at 12:26 AM I read it a few times, it finally clicked in my head... great read, very clever. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/10/05 at 12:35 PM I like the fact, Indigo, that you are experimenting with different styles and it is not necessary, I don't believe, to adopt to any particular one. Picasso painted in all sorts or styles and moods and look where that got him. And as I think there is more than one person habiting inside us, each of those dogs will, I suppose, have their day or should. after all its only fair and experimentation is the spice of life. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/03/05 at 06:23 AM Indigo, the poem has enough mystery to make it compelling and worth figuring out. I'll have to go read some of your other poetry to see if this is typical. Oh, btw - congratulations on being this month's member spotlight.
~Chelle~ |
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