| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/31/05 at 12:37 AM Shades of Poe! He would have loved this I think. Paradox and ambiguity extraordinary in a direct and succinct manner. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/31/05 at 11:16 PM This is like inverted poetry, Charlie. This may be your finest work, I like it a lot and I mean that right-side-up.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 02/01/05 at 05:32 AM I really love this poem ... excellent piece!! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 02/01/05 at 05:57 AM Ah...the dark poetic side of Mr. Minshall finally emerges......good one! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/02/05 at 02:11 AM An pleasantly unexpected twist in your poetic journey Charlie, and a refreshing one at that. Kudos! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/03/05 at 12:46 AM Love this Charlie, just as much as I love ravens. They are fantastic birds - you're a fantastic poet! (I don't even need the knife and the butter) ;-) |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 02/03/05 at 07:13 AM This poem speaks much louder than words.Wonderful piece, Charlie.Btw i am so glad that u were under the member spotlight for Jan.It is very well deserved, Charlie. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 02/03/05 at 01:54 PM Poe-rific little verse that is subtle and well-crafted. Thanks for posting. :) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 02/03/05 at 11:37 PM Not your usual levity but the wordplay is still brilliant - good one Charles! |