| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/19/05 at 11:11 PM Newly fallen... acknowledging another snow-fall as nature, not man, intends. I find this haunting, as if to remind us of those who have forgotten or do not remember often enough in "real time." I also can't help but want to maybe lay my hands on the stones to warm them. Beautifully said, David. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/20/05 at 04:58 AM (No pun intended) but heavy, powerful. Amazing how so much can be visualized from three lines. Fine work sir! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/20/05 at 07:53 PM very intense imagery came from this piece right to my very heart... blessings... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 01:01 AM Newly fallen... a haunting idea, considering the ambiguity of whether the snow or the inhabitants of the graves are "newly fallen". Great read. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/22/05 at 11:12 PM touching...the last line makes it |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/23/05 at 07:47 PM Oh yeah! I really like the ambiguity of the last line. This is a well-chiseled ku, my man.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/25/05 at 10:44 PM Sad but well done haiku Dave...Charlie |
| Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 01/26/05 at 05:26 PM definitely the most exquisitely-crafted haiku i have read on pps. wonderful work, my dear. |
