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Topic: Fishes of my Mind
by Melina Raven Maness Dieboldundefined 01/18/2005 Author's Note: for topic thread, topic by Kyle Ann Kish.
Posted on 01/18/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melina Raven Maness Diebold
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| Posted by Mark Maxey on 01/18/05 at 11:28 PM again...love the line.."Goldfish fantasies bobble around" what a great way to write about those things around us...great job! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/19/05 at 12:22 AM As an aquarium owner I really liked all the references to and use of the different types of fish and their individual "tasks" and personalities used in your "aquarium mind." Well done! |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 01/19/05 at 05:02 AM "The dissociative algae-eaters suck to the sides
and clean up the mess left behind" <--- Melina, this line really hit "home" to me. Your imagery and use of emotion .... with your comparisons works so well in this poem. Great job!
~~ Kyle Anne
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