| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 01/18/05 at 05:44 AM so beautiful and calming. you are a wonderful mother. the only thing you could add is the exact song you sang to him. i figure it's one of your favorites like ja rule. ;) |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/18/05 at 01:37 PM This is so sweet...so loving...and yes, God's angels were there. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/18/05 at 06:57 PM very mellow and beautifully crafted for something you "dashed off..." i guess it's true: the very best and the most loving comes straight from the heart |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/19/05 at 03:48 AM Your son looks like a little angel. Your poem
about a time with him is relly nice...Charlie |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 01/19/05 at 10:19 PM A very heart-felt piece of work here.. so gentle and maternal in an effective way. Great read.. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 01/20/05 at 02:54 AM this is so sweet and your boy is adorable!!! this is such a touching piece, reminding me of my mom and how she still is there whenever i need to talk with her... you moms are a gift from heaven above!! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/21/05 at 05:01 PM our child are such beautiful gifts... this poem is gorgeously precious, just like our wee ones... blessings... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/22/05 at 01:44 PM A very tender, loving and touching account of your growing relationship. Looks like the child will provide you with many moments that you'll be able to write about for years to come. Looking forward to reading them. Thanks for sharing them with us! |
