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Wearing Elegant

by Charles J Hannan

In the shine
I can see your smile
A beautiful thing

Wearing elegant
Sealed with a kiss
A beautiful ring

Your lips taste
Hot ice cream
Flavourful cone

Embraced you
Becoming
An intricate one

01/17/2005

Posted on 01/17/2005
Copyright © 2024 Charles J Hannan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/17/05 at 04:35 PM

This is wonderful sweetheart, thank you!

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/18/05 at 01:36 PM

a heartwarming piece in our deep freeze up here. I'll forego even warm ice cream, thanks. I like the intricate, as it goes well with the ring as well as the beautiful woman.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/19/05 at 07:35 PM

Poignant piece of writing Charles, and fine tribuite that significant other.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/22/05 at 05:52 PM

so nice to see your POTD!! Congrats honey :)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/22/05 at 07:57 PM

Charles, Congratulations on POTD! I love this simple declaration of love. In the second stanza, "Sealed with a kiss" was one of my favorite songs when I was in my teens. Sung by Brian Hyland. Thank you for the memories and wonderful poem.
~Chelle~

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/22/05 at 11:47 PM

Congratulations on poem of the day Charles...Charlie

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/28/05 at 07:37 PM

This is a smiling, sparkle of a gem.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/29/05 at 05:25 AM

Awwww, I'm way touched. Uh, I mean this is so touching...Congratulations on POTD!!! And kudos to you for having such a WONDERFUL sign. other.

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