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Trilogy of Rain

by Melissa Arel

Silent hearts listen
As winter rain falls softly
Icy rooftops glisten




Naked tree branches
Shiver from the cold rainstorm
Awaiting the sun




Wet drops kiss my lashes
Drenching my hair with laughter
Playing in the rain


01/14/2005

Author's Note: Its raining outside today.. inspiration comes in beautiful forms :)

Posted on 01/14/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/14/05 at 09:10 PM

Beautiful: Picture and the poems. Very well done Mel...Charlie

Posted by Christel Crews on 01/15/05 at 05:44 AM

i haven't read many haikus that i would say are marvelous b/c i think it is a difficult form to try, but this is beautiful, painting a clear and vivid image, bringing life to a computer screen! :)

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 01/15/05 at 07:27 AM

lissa...you know you're really good at painting verbal images with water. *claps loudly*

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/17/05 at 04:34 AM

All of them quite beautiful captures... [;0)~

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