Silent hearts listen As winter rain falls softly Icy rooftops glisten Naked tree branches Shiver from the cold rainstorm Awaiting the sun Wet drops kiss my lashes Drenching my hair with laughter Playing in the rain
01/14/2005
Posted on 01/14/2005Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
Beautiful: Picture and the poems. Very well done Mel...Charlie
i haven't read many haikus that i would say are marvelous b/c i think it is a difficult form to try, but this is beautiful, painting a clear and vivid image, bringing life to a computer screen! :)
lissa...you know you're really good at painting verbal images with water. *claps loudly*
All of them quite beautiful captures... [;0)~