Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 01/08/05 at 03:48 PM again, i repeat ... i want a pillowcase like that! |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 01/08/05 at 04:25 PM awwww...dang hotel..you are so sweet, honey..MUAHS!!! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/08/05 at 07:16 PM Lots and visuals...and impact Anne for just two stanzas. Well done! |
Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/09/05 at 04:39 AM So earthy and yet ethereal, Anne. I can very much identify with this poem. |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/09/05 at 01:07 PM your scent and our memories was my favorite image. Wonderful souvenir poem. |
Posted by Ann Krischus on 01/09/05 at 02:05 PM i love when pillows do that. great poem, very universal theme. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/09/05 at 06:47 PM love is in the air... oh, i know that scent of one who has just gone... great read, anne... blessings... |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/09/05 at 09:52 PM What a romantic poem! Sometimes unplanned things turn out well. Have you washed the pillow case yet? Beautiful. |
Posted by JD Clay on 01/10/05 at 04:05 AM There isn't one court in the land that would find you guilty in the case of the missing ambrosial pillow case. Your lovelorn poem has set a precedence for lawmakers and poets alike, and your poetic license is only exceeded by those charming flared nostrils and that euphoric grin on your longingly lovely face. Good stuff, Anne.
Pe4ce... |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/10/05 at 01:58 PM don't tell anyone that this avowed cynic said this but...so sweet! Happy for the both of you!!! :) |
Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 01/10/05 at 03:57 PM Nothing like the scent of your lover and being forced to sleep in late. |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/10/05 at 06:19 PM Without that extra time you wouldn't have gotten the pillow case...sweet |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 01/11/05 at 01:48 AM you left the sheets?!?!?. j/k. wonderful piece |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 01/15/05 at 02:46 PM Oh Anne! I know this longing. This is a wrenching display of that. A new favorite of mine. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/20/05 at 07:50 PM The pillow case thief... the poem could be the start of a great romance! Excellent read. Thanks for sharing. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/19/06 at 04:07 PM Brings back strange, but nice memories. I was a pillow thief too! :-)
Nice write- made me smile! |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/19/06 at 04:07 PM Brings back strange, but nice memories. I was a pillow thief too! :-)
Nice write- made me smile! |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/20/06 at 01:15 PM Great poem and do I too have a memory almost exactly like this.... |
Posted by Kris Mara on 05/15/09 at 08:02 PM Oh, I know this feeling! Very nice... |