A Failed Realtionship Is...

by J. P. Davies

A coupon that you post
on the fridge, thinking
"That's a really good deal."

But you forget about it,
and as the days go by
it slips into expiration.

And one day,
you look at the fridge,
realize that it's over,

and think,

"Damn, that was a good deal."


Author's Note: Just a thought. :)

Posted on 12/18/2004
Copyright © 2022 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 12/19/04 at 03:59 AM

hahahaha I yeah, cept when I look for all my old coupons, they're in some little box or tin and their all faded and yellow. That or they were used as kindling.... hmm...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/29/04 at 08:30 AM

Neat analogy Jordan. Well done!

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