haiku (indian summer rain) by David R Spellman
Indian summer rain
patters a snow shovel
left by the back door
11/22/2004 Author's Note: Entered for the Tadpole Society's November 2004 kukai contest.
Posted on 12/06/2004 Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/06/04 at 04:19 PM congratulations, that's terrific. Not explicit in my book, but wonderful. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/06/04 at 05:40 PM LOL! Nice one or should I say won David. Reminds me of how even though one doesn't have to shovel rain, I'd rather have snow this time of year. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/07/04 at 12:20 PM Says it all! So very descriptive and expressive! |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/11/04 at 05:08 AM A wonderful, true-to-form haiku. |
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