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haiku (indian summer rain)

by David R Spellman

 
Indian summer rain
patters a snow shovel
left by the back door
 
 
 

11/22/2004

Author's Note: Entered for the Tadpole Society's November 2004 kukai contest.

Posted on 12/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/06/04 at 04:19 PM

congratulations, that's terrific. Not explicit in my book, but wonderful.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/06/04 at 05:40 PM

LOL! Nice one or should I say won David. Reminds me of how even though one doesn't have to shovel rain, I'd rather have snow this time of year.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/07/04 at 12:20 PM

Says it all! So very descriptive and expressive!

Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/11/04 at 05:08 AM

A wonderful, true-to-form haiku.

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