| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/29/04 at 06:04 PM Nicely captures both the fragility and strength of the human condition. I especially like the idea expressed in those last two lines Rula. |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 11/29/04 at 07:52 PM the poem definitely carries the spirit of the title |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 11/30/04 at 02:24 PM When love and hope meet they contract into a seed of faith, capable of 'Journeying through this turbulent world
on these sturdy wings of fragile dreams
tending together the garden of life
from which raw hopes begin to grow' Oh! you said it all. My hearty congratulations to kara and your blood brother Joe.
|
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/01/04 at 04:54 AM Rula, this is beautiful and quite a moving tribute to you new niece. Proud aunts get to strut a little, so go ahead. I love the whole poem, but the last two lines are just awesome. |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 12/01/04 at 07:11 PM Very touching and also very profound. Simple words carrying such enormous meaning is proof to their depth. Very nicely done. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/01/04 at 09:16 PM you said it so beautifully Rula! |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 12/04/04 at 02:38 AM Rula, this is supberb. I actually have big tears rolling down my cheeks from this poem. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 12/08/04 at 05:11 PM Rula, I love this poem...It is so beautiful and I really mean it. Im all teary eyed. Thank you so much for writing this. And Yes, I would like a handwritten copy for our scrapbook! |
