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Secret Lover (Un-rhymed sonnet)
by Paganini JonesI do not ask for much from one I'd love.
I do not need a god of awesome looks
or strength, or technical ability.
I don't much care if he be tall or short.
Rich or poor? Why care for passing wealth
when what I crave would last eternity?
I do not ask for much from one I'd love,
but just a man, much like any other
save in this one respect - he'd hold my love
but never take it as his given right.
He'd cherish it, a hidden garden
buried deep within his secret soul, and
I would dwell secure within that place, as
gardener to tend, and grow, and love for ever.
03/18/2001 Posted on 11/14/2004
Copyright © 2024 Paganini Jones
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/15/04 at 12:04 AM What more or less could one ask for of a potential lover. Superby expressed Pag. Have added it to my favorties. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/02/05 at 02:41 PM this secret lover sounds intoxicating... excellent choice for POTD... congrats... blessings... |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/02/05 at 04:06 PM That is the most endearing piece of poetry I have come across in modern times. It is only fitting that this fine effort sends you into the Pathetic Hall of Champions. Congratulations, Pag!
Pe4ce.. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/02/05 at 08:39 PM Congratulations for poem of the day. Well done
Pagan....Charlie |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/03/05 at 07:37 AM Paganini, this is wonderful and no more than any woman would expect from a guy. CONGRATULATIONS!!! on POTD! |
| Posted by Amanda Bullington on 02/04/05 at 02:58 AM I'm really liking the "god of awesome looks" line. If only everyone felt that way..nice work.. |
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