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Two, One, None
by Shonda Creemer
- I had a dream...
- Two people falling
- Reaching for each
- A connection of hearts
- and I dreamt of you.
- I felt a need...
- To become one
- A beautiful union
- Inside and outside
- and I needed you.
- I found a love...
- So pure for an instant
- Loosing its hold
- Now bleeding to death
- and I loved you.
- I endured a loss...
- Where did you go?
- How did we get here?
- Here is nothing
- and I lost you.
- In the end there was...
- Small bits of us
- Yearning for hope
- Composed of blistering numbness
- and I miss you.
- But most of all there is...
- The dream born
- from a need
- given birth to
- our love dying
- in it's loss
- missing it all.
Two became One
now we are None.
And I cry.
08/12/2004 Posted on 11/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 11/08/04 at 12:21 AM I echo Jordan's WoW.. this is good stuff! |
| Posted by Kenneth Lau on 11/08/04 at 11:38 PM Interesting structure. I'm a sucker for lost love poems :) Good job |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/24/09 at 04:59 AM I chose the view poetry by random and am glad I did, am finding some great gems! I like this, the last three lines are powerful to me. |
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