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Sniffles And Sneezes

by Charles E Minshall

Snow white winter
With naked trees.
Raw shivering cold
Up to the knees.
Sniffles and sneezes
Coughs and wheezes.
Oh bejeezes!
I hate the freezes.

 

10/22/2004

Posted on 10/22/2004
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sarah Graves on 10/22/04 at 09:47 PM

Haha, I had to read this one aloud. Great stuff, once again, Charles! :)

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/23/04 at 02:22 AM

sums it up thoroughly! well done. Bless you.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/23/04 at 08:26 PM

HAHAHA...welcome to Canada...land of the great white north. Coming soon to a backyard near you! ;o)

Posted by Mike Loftis on 10/23/04 at 11:24 PM

heh heh heh Move south young man. Cute poem.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 10/25/04 at 03:25 AM

Ah....Ah....Ah.....Choo!!!!

Posted by David R Spellman on 10/31/04 at 01:43 PM

With this you turn the misery of the freezes into a poem which pleases!

Posted by Alex Smyth on 11/06/04 at 01:35 PM

Hahaha, great choice for POTD! I hate the freezes too, am off to the hardware store for all the weatherizing stuff this Saturday morning. Good one, Charlie:o)

Posted by David R Spellman on 11/06/04 at 11:42 PM

Great to read this again... and congrats on POTD!

Posted by JD Clay on 11/07/04 at 01:51 AM

Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! A frigid POTD salute to ya, Charlie...pe4ce

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/24/04 at 12:27 AM

Good one Charlie! It made me laugh outloud. Good thing no one's home, or they'd cart me off to that place with padded walls. Laughter cures all kinds of ills and that's what your poetry does for me. Keep 'em coming!

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