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Scrambled Eggs

by Shonda Creemer

girl casually spies boy
girl finally gets boy
girl falls hard for boy
then boy breaks girls heart

young love sucks and
never even experiences
breakfast in bed

So,
how do you like your eggs?

10/20/2004

Posted on 10/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/22/04 at 06:39 PM

Over easy please; I prefer my yolks soft. Refreshingly light and witty expression of young romance without the poem falling into the trap of teen angst or a diary entry. Well done Shonda.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/23/04 at 02:57 AM

Yes, you have generalized this affair which lacks understanding , consequently, proving to be just a temporary affair.Nicely put.

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