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I Wander

by Alicia Vann

With every age
the road narrows.
Ponder the whispers
long forgotten
by some.
I forgot
or forget sometimes
to steal a moment
and seal a memento.
I did not notice
the narrowing of time
or the pace at which
your time had come.
I now walk in footsteps
formerly planted
to soak up a memory
and understand
what road may
be left for me.
I yearn to learn
from it or lean on it
for solace.
Make me a token for
years of something.
So I can find my way
again.

10/19/2004

Posted on 10/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Alicia Vann

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kenneth Lau on 10/20/04 at 02:58 AM

Man, i really really like this poem. Fave lines are "to steal a moment and seal a memento" Thinking about it I think it is the imagery of this that really got me. "make me a token for years of something" really gets me too.

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 10/20/04 at 03:41 AM

Simply beautiful, Alicia. Welcome to Pathetic. I look forward to reading more of your pieces, especially if they are anything like this.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/23/04 at 11:33 PM

Both beautiful and haunting poetics, that I'm sure each of us can relate to in our own way. Thanks for sharing this!

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/06/09 at 12:10 PM

That's beautiful. A very worthy POTD! Congrats.

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