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Remnants

by Jane E Pearce

I fingered the petals, one by one

until the velvet wings

floated softly to the floor,

only stem and heart remained

for me to explore.

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I stroked the cross fervently,

in search for buried truth,

the Body, limp, blood stained,

spoke of Heaven's gate

but somethings were unexplained.

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I clasped time in my hands,

and squeezed days into nights

to keep the hours chained

until they oozed into the past,

and only death remained.

10/17/2004

Posted on 10/17/2004
Copyright © 2026 Jane E Pearce

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 10/18/04 at 03:42 AM

i love the last stanza... this piece is oozing with imagery. it is lovely

Posted by JD Clay on 10/18/04 at 12:50 PM

This gives rise to the notion that in the end, all we have is the present moment. Wonderfully crafted trilogy, Jane...pe4ce

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/19/04 at 04:58 PM

Great steady buildup to that third outstanding stanza. Good to read you again Jane.

Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 10/21/04 at 12:30 AM

A poem I will remember. Squeeze and ooz are more honored here than I could have imagined they could be.

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