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Remnants by Jane E PearceI fingered the petals, one by one
until the velvet wings
floated softly to the floor,
only stem and heart remained
for me to explore.
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I stroked the cross fervently,
in search for buried truth,
the Body, limp, blood stained,
spoke of Heaven's gate
but somethings were unexplained.
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I clasped time in my hands,
and squeezed days into nights
to keep the hours chained
until they oozed into the past,
and only death remained. 10/17/2004 Posted on 10/17/2004 Copyright © 2026 Jane E Pearce
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 10/18/04 at 03:42 AM i love the last stanza... this piece is oozing with imagery. it is lovely |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/18/04 at 12:50 PM This gives rise to the notion that in the end, all we have is the present moment. Wonderfully crafted trilogy, Jane...pe4ce |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/19/04 at 04:58 PM Great steady buildup to that third outstanding stanza. Good to read you again Jane. |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 10/21/04 at 12:30 AM A poem I will remember. Squeeze and ooz are more honored here than I could have imagined they could be. |
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