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haiku (autumn leaves)

by David R Spellman

 
autumn leaves –
winter chill
descends
 
 
 

10/07/2004

Posted on 10/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/13/04 at 02:29 AM

Succinct and reflective as haiku should be.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/13/04 at 03:27 AM

How I love this, because I remember how the chill of autumn used to tingle my nose. Then remind me that of football season, loose warm pumpkin pie and roast turkey smells, and the fantastic change of leaves.

Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 10/13/04 at 04:44 PM

you always write such wonderful things about autumn!!! this one is great

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/16/04 at 05:36 PM

Perfect verse to fall into autumn with! ;)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/17/04 at 09:46 PM

Quite effective for so few words David. And I can sure attest to the message, having just back from a walk to the grcoery store half an hour ago.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/20/04 at 04:07 AM

Excellent Dave....Charlie

Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/01/04 at 03:14 PM

Uuuuummmmm.... this echoes my very feelings about the season. Well Done!

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 12/08/04 at 12:13 AM

So beautiful...:)

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