the mountain by Richard Trotter Unaware, she took the last strand of summer threw it in the air, doomed to fall upon me its shrapnel carved scars in a bearded rock whose strength is nought in isolation the seconds are dying, time not spent watching them compete for her smile. 10/12/2004 Posted on 10/12/2004 Copyright © 2024 Richard Trotter Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/13/04 at 01:58 PM Interesting write.. as always its filled with awesome imagery.. Great work! Posted by Stephanie Kent on 10/14/04 at 03:08 PM "she took the last strand of summer"...wow. As always, your imagery is so amazing and different. I love this. Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/07/11 at 11:05 PM You had me at "threw it in the air." That just built the energy for the whole piece. Nice work. Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 12/07/11 at 11:08 PM congratulations on potd! excellent write! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)