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Silhouette
by Shonda Creemerfrom surreal passion
he experiments through
absurd electric angels
but how deep can her
rhythm feel of she
screamed purple metaphors
to his dark masterpiece
creator and sculpture
appear as one
a balance of wild harmony 10/11/2004 Author's Note: Title & piece composed from my first
go at online magnetic poetry.
Different kind of process, but
interesting all the same. See website: www.magneticpoetry.com
Posted on 10/12/2004
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 10/12/04 at 10:01 PM Good piece, and I'm definitely trying the site. ~Nita |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/13/04 at 04:09 AM Shonda, I like the mixture of unusual images in this poem. My favorite line is, "she screamed purple metaphors/to his dark masterpiece." |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/27/05 at 03:45 AM So I see I'm not the only one who plays with magnetic poetry :) I really liked the thought of 'electric angels' and the line Michelle quoted above. Very unique & wonderful! :) |
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