by Shonda Creemer

from surreal passion
he experiments through
absurd electric angels

but how deep can her
rhythm feel of she
screamed purple metaphors
to his dark masterpiece

creator and sculpture

appear as one

a balance of wild harmony


Author's Note: Title & piece composed from my first go at online magnetic poetry. Different kind of process, but interesting all the same. See website: www.magneticpoetry.com

Posted on 10/12/2004
Copyright © 2021 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 10/12/04 at 10:01 PM

Good piece, and I'm definitely trying the site. ~Nita

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/13/04 at 04:09 AM

Shonda, I like the mixture of unusual images in this poem. My favorite line is, "she screamed purple metaphors/to his dark masterpiece."

Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/27/05 at 03:45 AM

So I see I'm not the only one who plays with magnetic poetry :) I really liked the thought of 'electric angels' and the line Michelle quoted above. Very unique & wonderful! :)

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