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Autumn Soup

by Deborah S Regan

my autumn soup is steaming

my autumn soup is steaming

 

my soup-bowl is ready

my soup-bowl is ready

 

my squashes are buttery

my squashes are buttery

 

dip in the bread-roll

dip in the bread-roll

10/12/2004

Posted on 10/12/2004
Copyright © 2024 Deborah S Regan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/16/04 at 08:17 PM

Great use of repetition Deborah to deliver an enticing meal. :o)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/23/09 at 05:55 PM

Wonderful repetitive verse. Children should love this and may wish to add to it!

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