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little Rainbows

by Shonda Creemer

crimson enchantment brings about an
ocherous union fulfilling their
sallow love in a mysterious
verdure sensuality bursting with
sapphire electric passion engulfing
indigo streams of tears dissolving
violet years of loneliness

10/03/2004

Author's Note: just in case the yellow is too bright in line 3 that word is ~ sallow ~ tried to write it without the colors added, but it seemed to loose some of it meaning

Posted on 10/04/2004
Copyright © 2025 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/09/04 at 01:26 PM

The continued abstracts work well in this romantic piece. Short, but speaks volumes.

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/23/05 at 08:37 PM

Wow. Yes, the colors are fantastic with this.

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