| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/22/04 at 10:58 PM Beautiful use of nature and body, mixed with stormy imagery to bring a wonderful verse to life. Excellent read. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/23/04 at 04:22 AM I'm with you Lori, sometimes we're better off stewing in our ouw juices. After all, that's what makes us better with age.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 09/24/04 at 06:33 PM Well done; nice ending. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/27/04 at 04:09 PM hi lori :) i haven't visited your library in a while. i love the last stanza just awesome. such a shocker. powerful wow |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 11/11/04 at 08:07 PM Very much a beautiful and memorable verse. The contrast between the drizzling cold weather and the energy and intensity of the storm at the end is wonderful. |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 01/01/06 at 04:30 PM this is beautifully written. i love the imagery. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/01/08 at 12:26 PM Beautiful and a very worthy POTD, Congrats!!! |
