| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/20/04 at 05:21 PM Even without the author's note.... the haiku.... is superb! Love the imagry! |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 09/20/04 at 07:26 PM This is a masterpiece... |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/20/04 at 11:00 PM ...a prophet in its own right. I love this shrub, and so appreciate the haiku describing it! Really good writing, observing and thinking, David. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/21/04 at 02:00 AM A splendid poem for my favorite time of year, early September to mid October. Thanks for sharing this David! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/21/04 at 11:42 AM exquisite!! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/21/04 at 12:01 PM Very descriptive! I have a bush whose leaves turn red in the fall The name escapes me at the moment but your description reminds me of it. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/22/04 at 03:32 PM Ahh! the perfection of nature and spirit, captured in a jewel of autumnal poetry, Dave...pe4ce |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/22/04 at 09:39 PM Autumn leaves speaking fire with cool breath... amazing how inspirational your words are. Great read. |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 09/22/04 at 10:39 PM well done for saying so much with so few words. i feel verbose now... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/29/04 at 01:16 AM A flaming good Haiku Dave...Charlie |
| Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 10/26/04 at 07:55 PM ok, upon reading the title, i thought of the recent plitical going-ons, and it made the reading of the poem... very different :) hehe. and quite enjoyable :) |
| Posted by Pall Kvaran on 08/15/07 at 11:36 PM One of the best haikus I´ve seen. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 08/28/10 at 01:38 AM this is so very good |
