| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/16/04 at 11:10 PM gorgeous imagery and wonderful to this!! absolutely magnificent!!!! |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/16/04 at 11:10 PM wonderful "FEEL" to this!! i wish we could edit our comments... |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/17/04 at 04:54 PM Both 'threat' and 'promise' a sad light shining on the destructive tendency of human nature. That's what I understood from this. Truly a lament, a heavy hearted confession even. Very well done Richard, left side, right side, both together...very well written. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/17/04 at 04:56 PM One question though...who are the 'unreachable'? I tend to think of them as the common 'mob'...I am interested in your intention... |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/17/04 at 05:59 PM Hmmm...I am thinking this might even be about 'discovery' and the curiousity of man...the urgent need to toy with and try to understand anything and everything...hmmm....many layers to this... |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 09/17/04 at 09:45 PM quite compelling Richard |
| Posted by Tom Goss on 09/21/04 at 01:58 PM Explosively terse, and would make an interesting song - with the left side being the chorus. |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/05/04 at 04:08 PM how have i not seen this before? and how are you not the most famous poet ever? |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/21/05 at 10:34 PM Unique, original and utterly yours. Impressive in every way! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 03/18/10 at 09:49 PM Oh I love this! I just want to surround it with the photos of butterflies and hang it on a wall.... |
