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i would kill him with a butter knife just because....

by Olivia Weinkein

it would take so long (full title)

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he asked me
where do you keep your gun
and without hesitation i replied

in my mouth.

09/15/2004

Posted on 09/16/2004
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Barbara Griffith on 09/16/04 at 03:53 AM

Dark, excellent, and real. I like it.

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/21/05 at 01:47 AM

this is incredibly awesome. it packs a punch exactly as needed... well, i don't know who its directed to, but i can just imagine! awesome awesome!

Posted by Lauren Singer on 09/14/05 at 01:43 AM

so good. soooooo good. i effing love it.

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 05/04/07 at 12:37 AM

This is a favorite of mine.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 06/05/08 at 04:12 PM

AWESOME... SIMPLY AWESOME.....

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/25/10 at 12:07 AM

hahaha this probably shouldn't have cracked me up, but it did. one helluva piece!

Posted by Timothy Wilson on 07/09/11 at 04:39 AM

Freaking perfectly perfect! well done!

Posted by Vivienne Grant on 02/01/12 at 09:27 AM

witty brevity - love this one :)

Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/04/12 at 01:29 AM

I'm so glad this has been in my favorites FOREVER... I needed it in my arsenal TODAY! <3 ~N

Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 01/29/15 at 05:28 PM

Now that's how you throw a punch! Nicely done!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/15 at 03:44 PM

Deadly. Ha!

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