| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 09/17/04 at 12:58 PM The last few lines were killer.. how it makes the heart ache! You've chosen the perfect words for this poem.. amazing piece. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 09/19/04 at 05:21 PM i've been waiting for something new from you for a long time!!!! great work! ~ maryellen |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/20/04 at 12:00 AM ir eally enjoyed this. especially the first few lines and the last ones |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/20/04 at 12:00 AM ir eally enjoyed this. especially the first few lines and the last ones |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 09/20/04 at 12:52 AM the last lines are captivating. good read |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/21/11 at 11:23 PM I actually liked the first lines more. The last lines are begging to burst, but aren't quite there. Then again, who can tell the heart how it aches? Very honest. |
