Smooth to the Finish by Maureen Glaude For Heather Ferguson
at the bead shop
shell search for "findings"
this artisan of jewellery
finding the clasps
to match bead
stone and bone --
her raw materials,
at home
she works with deft hands
attaching these parts to the
pieces-in-progress
strings of beads
or precious stones
designing, experimenting, making fit
the style, size and coloring
of the persons
theyll adorn
sometimes after all the
threading and arranging
seems completed, she rolls them all off
and starts over
and over
silent and unflustered
opening to new tries
to satisfy herself
as she works
the multi-colored beads, or solids
smooth stone, bone, coral-like pebbles
she retrieves and re-builds from the many
mini-plastic bags around her
seeming to know what she has where
among the families of baubles
at first, she threads them on wires
that will be replaced with
the finished findings and clasps
that suit each piece
to hold her art together
around necks and wrists
after last fittings
as I sit beside her, watching
while she works on mine
it occurs to me
if only we could locate
the hardware needed
to hold people together
re-string the beads that fall off or fail
to work in the original arrangement
theyve landed in
re-align them side-by-side
until they do
drop or add a few components
to balance
making the whole unit
into a closer fit and match
of strong duration
09/13/2004 Author's Note: a first draft
Posted on 09/13/2004 Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/13/04 at 04:01 PM ... lovely tradesmanship in wordology ... love the extrapolation from beads to us ... deep ... and smoooooth !!! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/14/04 at 01:16 AM Excellent descriptiveness throughout. The bringing in of the human equivalent was a pleasant surprise, and great way of finishing up an all round outstanding poem. Too bad you didn't read it yesterday with Heather in the audience, but maybe you were still putting the final touches on this poetic jewellery? |
Posted by Laura Doom on 09/19/04 at 06:38 PM Colourful analogy - I believe it's called genetic engineering? :> |
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