Depth by Quinlan L GibsonI cannot see; out from the depths of me.
No end in sight, walk towards the light
and she will set you free.
Change is here, reach way down there
discover mystery; and faith doeth lead
the stray now breathe today
the air has energy.
Assume the stance; lead the dance
step right foot left, begin the quest
that you began, because you can. 09/09/2004 Author's Note: College. 14 years it's been since i've been given information to learn, process and pass tests on. Chemistry may kill me, but I'll get an A first! My depth goes deeper as the weeks go by. Still not one doubt in myself.
Posted on 09/09/2004 Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
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Posted by Christopher Shin on 09/09/04 at 05:55 PM A very interesting piece. College does seem like a journey without an end. Maybe when it is done and said we can look back and see the foot prints we left in our quest. |
Posted by Lori Johnson on 09/09/04 at 06:22 PM YES YOU CAN!!!
Woohoo, you go girl!! :)
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Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/10/04 at 06:20 PM GO QUIN! You can do it! (All night long?) |
Posted by John Ilotan on 09/11/04 at 01:53 PM Nice write Quin, good luck. |
Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 09/11/04 at 03:19 PM This is really well written, I love how dramatically you phrase things here. I have heard people say education expands them, this is the first time I have heard of education making them deeper. I think being an older student, it must have this differing effect on you. Nice job. |
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