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by Quinlan L Gibson

I cannot see; out from the depths of me.
No end in sight, walk towards the light
and she will set you free.
Change is here, reach way down there
discover mystery; and faith doeth lead
the stray now breathe today
the air has energy.
Assume the stance; lead the dance
step right foot left, begin the quest
that you began, because you can.

09/09/2004

Author's Note: College. 14 years it's been since i've been given information to learn, process and pass tests on. Chemistry may kill me, but I'll get an A first! My depth goes deeper as the weeks go by. Still not one doubt in myself.

Posted on 09/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christopher Shin on 09/09/04 at 05:55 PM

A very interesting piece. College does seem like a journey without an end. Maybe when it is done and said we can look back and see the foot prints we left in our quest.

Posted by Lori Johnson on 09/09/04 at 06:22 PM

YES YOU CAN!!! Woohoo, you go girl!! :)

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 09/10/04 at 06:20 PM

GO QUIN! You can do it! (All night long?)

Posted by John Ilotan on 09/11/04 at 01:53 PM

Nice write Quin, good luck.

Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 09/11/04 at 03:19 PM

This is really well written, I love how dramatically you phrase things here. I have heard people say education expands them, this is the first time I have heard of education making them deeper. I think being an older student, it must have this differing effect on you. Nice job.

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