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Fall Haiku I

by Maureen Glaude

an ant up a maple
summer turns
something like us


Posted on 09/03/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/05/04 at 02:56 PM

Nice piece. I like the comparison of us with the ant up a maple.

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 09/07/04 at 04:38 PM

Simple, succinct, and surprising, like good haiku should be - thanks! d:-)

Posted by Paganini Jones on 09/07/04 at 07:29 PM

Poor ant! Will it sit on a leaf to get down??

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