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Genuine Imitations
by Amanda L MarronYou are consumed with worries
That I dont understand
But still Ill try to give you advice
Try and comprehend how she may feel
Think back to when it was the 4 of us
When she saw how you were with me
Maybe its strange for her
Maybe she has never viewed you in that way until now
I know how you are
I get how your mind works
So Im not going to get upset
Youre leaving soon to go half way around the world
You need to be held
Feel comfort in the arms around you
Though I still wish it was my embrace
You were longing for
08/29/2004 Posted on 08/29/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/01/04 at 01:54 AM WOW! Quite the build up to a killer closing. So subtle and yet so clear the message. Well done! Adds to favorites. |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/02/04 at 12:17 PM I agree. Great close. I like the mixture of sadness and duty to a friend. |
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