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Escaping to an Alternate Reality

by Amanda L Marron

i can feel the waves of music
crashing through me
as a tidal wave does to a coastal town
rushing foam over my head
enveloping myself so deep
transporting me to my dreams

08/23/2004

Author's Note: *edited on 9-2-04 with thanks to Chris Sorrenti for noticing my typo*

Posted on 08/24/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda L Marron

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 08/24/04 at 03:54 AM

mmmm overpowering....will there be more?

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/03/04 at 01:02 AM

Well written, worthy reminder of how alternate realities help us to survive in the reality of the everday. One little typo if I may, should 'waves' not be singular?

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