| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/23/04 at 11:25 AM this brings beautiful pictures to mind with such ease. Wonderful!! |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/23/04 at 03:00 PM thanks for this fresh treat from your pallette. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/23/04 at 03:31 PM Your haikus are always gorgeous :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/23/04 at 10:37 PM I see a huge palette high in the sky! Beautiful imagery. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 08/28/04 at 04:41 PM The Master prepares the canvas for His colours... so beautiful! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/31/04 at 06:04 PM Oh my friend.. this is lovely, reminds me of the sunsets I was privleged to view. Thank You... |
| Posted by Kenneth Lau on 09/04/04 at 03:55 AM The one thing I dislike about haikus is that it limits the ability to comment a little bit. For instance, all the things ur poem inspired in me, if I rambled about that, it wouldnt really be a comment about the poem itself lol. It is definitely a powerful and beautiful haiku, perfect for me to read because i loove sunset colors. great job |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/04/04 at 12:21 PM The repetition of the “s” consonant makes the piece flow so smoothly. It is also very interesting that you do not mention one specific color in the whole poem and yet it is one of the brightest and most colorful verses I’ve read in a while. Great read. |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/06/04 at 01:39 AM Outstanding in form and verse. |
