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Invisible

by Christel Crews

Go ahead
Do not ackowledge me
Remind me that I'm not really there
I'm just a figment of your imagination

Go ahead
Call me a friend
Do you know what that word means
If you don't care, don't say that you do

Go ahead
You know how to
Make me feel like I don't matter
I might not be standing in front of you

But I'm still here

08/21/2004

Author's Note: ok, so i just began rambling and this is what came out. its hard to describe the crap i'm feeling right now... this is just a piece of the big picture... thanks for reading

Posted on 08/21/2004
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/21/04 at 07:58 PM

Text well reflective of its title. I'd admire the dedication to form and artistry of expression, despite the difficult task of sorting through the feelings and coming up with the right words. Great work!

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 08/26/04 at 02:38 PM

hope you're doing well. being invisible doesn't last forever... this is a really good depiction of the feeling though.

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