| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 08/17/04 at 04:40 PM "But you left me here A girl undone without anything but fading whispers of everything
that I wanted this to be" - this is so lovely Sharona, thoughtful and so sad, yet full of hope somehow I think. Perhaps it's the sensitivity of the poet that emits this vibration of hope...yes, I feel it in your soft expression and plea for love. Very nicely done :-)
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| Posted by Wendy Geal on 08/17/04 at 07:22 PM "and all i wanted was just one love story to call my own" such an achingly beautiful piece. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/18/04 at 11:48 AM Those whispers are poor substitutes for real memmories. Superb word choice that really demonstrate feelings of disappointment and regret. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/20/04 at 03:57 PM this has the rhythm of a song...i love it muchly |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 08/20/04 at 07:09 PM This shows a new cast of light on an all too commomly felt emotion. Fresh...& alive with feeling. :)
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| Posted by Mo Couts on 09/15/14 at 09:29 PM The beauty of this crawls deep within me...truly. So nicely done. |
