| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 08/08/04 at 06:53 AM Incredible imagery...sounds like the "ex from beyond hell"! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 08/09/04 at 02:03 PM this just gets underneath your skin and the raw imagery is so potent and effective...great job! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 08/09/04 at 04:04 PM Interesting, that "you drip 'like' blood" - lots of inferences there - and that the eyes merely reflect images...what manner of egocentric alien has the protagonist been consorting with? A somewhat Gothic feel to this - a plasma-curdling, intense read. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/13/04 at 12:39 AM Hyperbole underscores the destructive nature of the relationship desribed. Stark, dark, deadly! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/16/04 at 01:20 PM and even, such love in a decayed state is infinitely less malodorous than politics, which has the worm inborn and the outward appeareances of lady charm. your words speak truths and those will ne'er decay. |
| Posted by Lizz Scott on 09/24/04 at 03:56 AM Beautifully dark, I like it! Imagery is awesome!!! |
| Posted by H.M Stevens on 05/25/06 at 11:21 PM I'm feelin it... wonderfulness. |
