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Ribbons
by Amanda ConlogueI am tied to you
heart and soul
with ribbons
thin and wide
satin and velveteen
great, frilly bows
wrapped around a present
and when you come home
I'll still be here
waiting to be opened. 08/06/2004 Posted on 08/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda Conlogue
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/07/04 at 07:24 AM I love this poem - it just expresses so sensuously anticipated desire, without being overtly erotic. Good work! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/07/04 at 02:45 PM A truly sweet poem, with just the right amount of syrup. A great update to the "tie a yellow ribbon..." phenomenon. |
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