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Color Haiku--Green

by Melanie A Bennett

Green grass swiftly cut
Continues growing so tall
Summer has arrived

08/05/2004

Author's Note: This haiku won sixth place in the Tadpole Society Color contest.

Posted on 08/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Melanie A Bennett

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/08/04 at 01:59 PM

You're on the right track here to a good haiku, showing how abundantly verdant summer is, and how many memories of summer are associated with green grass. I would just omit the words that seem like they were put in only for a 5-7-5 tally. haiku do not need to come in that syllable structure, as I have many times illustrated in the Tadpole forums. You've captured a good feeling of summer though.

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