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by Anne Engelen

Born
a shattered soul

I live
to collect the pieces

07/29/2004

Posted on 07/29/2004
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/29/04 at 11:59 AM

This is amazing. There is so much power in so few words. The words resonate with the reader and immediately allows the reader to be able to relate to what you are saying. Excellent craftmanship.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/29/04 at 12:56 PM

Positivity after long struggle, so succintly and effectively painted here.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/29/04 at 01:57 PM

short, to the point... and INCREDIBLY powerful... write on... blessings...

Posted by Rula Shin on 07/29/04 at 03:28 PM

Amazing Anne. Truly you have a great talent for these succinct pieces as everyone has pretty much said. Beautiful...I too am collecting...

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/29/04 at 04:43 PM

Geeeeeeez, but this is power-packed. It's all about the gathering, eh? And the value of the process...

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/30/04 at 04:47 AM

Very well done Annie....Charlie

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/30/04 at 10:39 PM

One of the most truthful four line poems I've ever read, and profound. This piece could represent every living soul on the planet in their own way.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 07/31/04 at 08:59 AM

this is a wow poem sweetie...excellent..MUAHS!!

Posted by Martini Koy on 07/31/04 at 12:52 PM

awesome annie! big impact.

Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/31/04 at 09:42 PM

Brevity at it's best!

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/02/04 at 10:50 AM

Zen like in its concision and insight...Nice work buddy! :)

Posted by Mara Meade on 08/02/04 at 03:51 PM

*quietly nods and smiles a half-smile* So well expressed, dear Anne. Beautiful.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 08/17/04 at 08:27 AM

Mmmm - I have no new comment to make - its all been said by others before me

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/15/09 at 07:03 PM

AN economy of words add up to a powerful piece! Great write

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