| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/29/04 at 03:29 AM ' but where you gonna go?' There's no place. so... just (run) BE. haha. A beautiful sarcasm.
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| Posted by Rula Shin on 07/29/04 at 05:25 PM As Ashok said, 'nowhere', so running will lead you there faster. Stay. Stay HERE and NOW. I really enjoyed this Chris as with all your works it is clever and well written with a hardy helping of sarcasm and witty plays on words. Wonderful job as always :-) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/29/04 at 08:07 PM Why be in a hurry to get to a place you'll end up after all. Take the time and enjoy getting there! Fun read. |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 07/30/04 at 09:46 AM rock is rolling to migraine is my favourite line in this intriguing "ditty-like" poem. Quite the rhythm and pace to coincide with the theme. Would make a good song. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/30/04 at 11:39 AM This tongue-in-cheek commentary on aging brings a smile! I walk rather than run thank you! Need not work up a sweat over getting old! LOL!! Your usual fresh look at life! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 08/01/04 at 01:18 AM A poem set at a very good pace just as it's title suggests and carries along with such neatly tucked in tongue in cheeks under some beautifully delivered lines. |
