| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/01/04 at 08:58 PM Oh, James. This one is RICH with all sorts of imagery and wonderful descriptives. I think I'm going to have to mull it over a few times to get the depth of it. NICE!!!!! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/01/04 at 09:06 PM I like this poem very much. It's about one of my favorite topics - nature, and the images are wonderful! I'm just not sure what a sorty is, but from the context, I gather it's a diving bird or something like that. Good work! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/06/04 at 04:10 PM The imagery is good detailing the seen and the unseen. The unseen are corners normally unseen. |
| Posted by Michael Faraday on 08/10/05 at 02:38 PM Very nice poem indeed! James I think the commas after every line are a distraction and unnecessary. :) Otherwise, well done. m |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/09/11 at 10:42 PM We've got a small flock that live in some large pine trees just down the street. We enjoy watching their comings and goings, and they are indeed quiet but for the odd squawk. I think you've caught their spirit here. |
