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Bring me out
by Alison McKenzieYou bring out the blunt in me
I dont know if I hate it
I read your words
I feel rage
I feel tenderness
I turn into the warrioress
I despise men for a minute
I love you for a minute
And I dont even know you
But I love the blunt -
You bring me out
06/26/2004 Posted on 06/27/2004
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/30/04 at 01:41 PM A fascinating comment on relationship and what it does TO us and FOR us. Well done, my dear. |
| Posted by Alastre Zidler on 07/09/04 at 03:51 PM Great wordplay here about the duality of the heart... the conflicting impulses cannot be an indecision when the heart is fighting both sides of the war simultaneously! You're a pro at documenting feelings... |
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