Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/23/04 at 01:22 PM Like my Trembling Stone poem, I like how this one's imagery and message are so subtly woven that it's difficult to divide concrete from metaphoric. Nice work; your diversity and prolificacy (if there's such a word) never fails to amaze me. |
Posted by Traci Mabats on 06/23/04 at 03:19 PM yeah, you could make the top part pink and the bottom part green and it would totally look like a flower. Its quite stimulating. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/23/04 at 08:18 PM You never fail to touch my heart with the delicate imagery of your poems. This is so beautiful, I don't think I'll ever look at another petunia the same way again. Thanks, Maureen! |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 06/26/04 at 05:23 PM the analogy of flowers and intimacy is lush in this piece... bravo! |