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when your not here..
by Lisa-Dawn SparlingThe sun is shining,
the wamth penetrates my skin,
but it might as well be raining,
when your not here.
I surrounded my friends,
wrapped up in the laughter,
but I still feel so lonely,
when you are not here.
The air feels so fresh,
the flowers are blooming,
they may as well be dying,
because you are not here. 06/17/2004 Author's Note: my boyfriend has been gone for 6 weeks attending school and I miss him..... a lot.
Posted on 06/18/2004
Copyright © 2025 Lisa-Dawn Sparling
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/29/04 at 02:27 PM This is really sweet, and who can't but relate to it in their own way? |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 08/14/08 at 04:07 PM this is heartfelt and simple. (although, the english major in me has to say that 'your' should be 'you're' in this case.) |
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