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by Maureen Glaude

the long-craved breeze
precipates the storm
two fronts clashing
in the climate
of a love affair

07/13/2003

Author's Note: call it what you will, for now. I believe it's tanka.

Posted on 06/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/11/04 at 02:26 AM

I really like the analogy here of how the tension between lovers heading for an argument or fight is similar to a storm building.

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