Haiku from Sharbot Lake (revised) by Maureen Glaudea loon drake
his emerald necklace
mirrored in the lake 06/07/2004 Posted on 06/08/2004 Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude
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Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/08/04 at 02:09 AM ooh, now that's a very regal loon, gliding around like he owns the place, heheh |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/08/04 at 12:02 PM I like both versions. The idea of water acting as a mirror for trees and wildlife I think is appealing to everyone. PS: While crossing the Rideau River this morning on the way to work I saw the swans. |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 06/08/04 at 11:43 PM very nice image, really liked this haiku :-) |
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