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Haiku from Sharbot Lake (revised)

by Maureen Glaude

a loon drake
his emerald necklace
mirrored in the lake

06/07/2004

Posted on 06/08/2004
Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/08/04 at 02:09 AM

ooh, now that's a very regal loon, gliding around like he owns the place, heheh

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/08/04 at 12:02 PM

I like both versions. The idea of water acting as a mirror for trees and wildlife I think is appealing to everyone. PS: While crossing the Rideau River this morning on the way to work I saw the swans.

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 06/08/04 at 11:43 PM

very nice image, really liked this haiku :-)

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