Haiku (from Sharbot Lake)
by Maureen Glaude
loon drake's necklace
over liquid silk
Posted on 06/07/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/07/04 at 08:12 PM|
Nature, but more specifically an icon of the Canadian outdoors captured at its regal best.
|Posted by J. P. Davies on 06/07/04 at 09:04 PM|
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/07/04 at 10:57 PM|
Line 2 seems a bit too metaphorical for haiku, but the focus in on the loon's markings is a good sensitive place to start, as the description of the lake as silken is interesting. But I come away not too sure what the moment is saying about summer.