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Haiku (from Sharbot Lake)

by Maureen Glaude

loon drake's necklace
emerald reign
over liquid silk

07/15/2004

Posted on 06/07/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

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Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/07/04 at 08:12 PM

Nature, but more specifically an icon of the Canadian outdoors captured at its regal best.

Posted by J. P. Davies on 06/07/04 at 09:04 PM

lovely haiku.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/07/04 at 10:57 PM

Line 2 seems a bit too metaphorical for haiku, but the focus in on the loon's markings is a good sensitive place to start, as the description of the lake as silken is interesting. But I come away not too sure what the moment is saying about summer.

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