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Haiku (from Sharbot Lake)
by Maureen Glaudeloon drake's necklace
emerald reign
over liquid silk
07/15/2004 Posted on 06/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/07/04 at 08:12 PM Nature, but more specifically an icon of the Canadian outdoors captured at its regal best. |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 06/07/04 at 09:04 PM lovely haiku. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/07/04 at 10:57 PM Line 2 seems a bit too metaphorical for haiku, but the focus in on the loon's markings is a good sensitive place to start, as the description of the lake as silken is interesting. But I come away not too sure what the moment is saying about summer. |
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