| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/06/04 at 05:01 PM 'The modern ones
Deprived
Of the old fashion
Happy ending'
yes, these are modern days with so much of technological evolution but at the cost of that old fashion endings. haha You presented this scene so distinctly.
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| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 06/06/04 at 05:20 PM yes, depressing thought...maybe you can still find the vintage fairy tales on ebay. lol |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/06/04 at 07:55 PM I say...bravo!...what I believe is that you have a knack at writing well...MUAHS!! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/07/04 at 04:53 PM Sigh. I know. Damn our idealism and the reality of it all...! I can really understand and relate to this poem! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/10/04 at 12:07 PM the happiness to all tales, great and small is that they have endings, no thanks to deadlines but to another time and less cruel. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/11/04 at 05:25 AM The ending of a life is never happy, it is what happens until then that makes living worthwhile.
Good poem Annie |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/22/04 at 09:22 PM Oh dear :(
But then, going back to the originals many didn'tb have those happy endings at all so perhaps you are going back to the real endings! |
| Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 06/24/04 at 06:12 PM so many comments, i feel silly adding mine! but it's simple, and well-worded. i might consider a more striking ending - but i do like it a lot, as it. thanks! |
